Cooking My Dinner
By Denver E. Torres
Fuck!
Shit!
Why did you have to do that?!
Go to hell!
What the fuck?
Damn it!
I stepped back a little.
These parading anathemas
I shouted, scolding the
Escaping cooking oil globules from the heated pan.
The escapees were like envenomed spits from the sting bees
When they landed on my skin: electrocuted
My poor pores and done millions of continuous mini-pinches
To my skin. Some of my skin became swollen and red
Like the tocino I am frying.
The rebel oils seemed to have
Made fun of me, done foolery,
Teased me more and added up to
The stressful day I had:
My Boss babbling bullshits inside my ears,
The Clients-Over-the-Phone who need a dictionary
For every word I say,
The terrific traffic taxing three hours of my already taxed day,
The pestering rain,
This oil,
Among others.
Oh, the day-long rain today meant that
My partially dry clothes from yesterday’s laundry
Will stench, like a rotten-egg, being denied of the right light
And from the hugs of the Sun.
Worst was that the doings of the rain mired
The virgin whiteness of my
I-saved-up-for-two-years-before-I-was-able-to-buy
Lacoste shoes.
My shoes now looked like a toiling carabao that just
Rested from the muddy farm.
And you, cooking oil! You seemed to have
Conspired with the other urban evils.
But your game and victory has ended already
As the cured pork cuts are now cooked.
And this, heated argument we have would finally end as well.
The viand’s starve-more smell insisted
That I leave my long day (stress) to the kitchen sink.
And so I ate my dinner, chewed the meat and rice like a King,
Took my time like a Queen and savored the tasty meal
Like a Commoner would, the meal that I have labored hard.
And thanked God…
Smiled.
I went back to the kitchen sink
To wash the dishes
And along I flushed my day’s stress down the drain.

Everyone’s got to have an outlet and the character’s outlet is food. I guess. The poem seems to have a spirit or somewhat an unseen copy which would reflect the writer’s personality. The writers outlet is food and and having written a poem this great flushes all the days shits and fucks. Kudos!!! But then again……….char!
Comment by DiegoYo! — March 20, 2008 @ 9:48 am
hahahaha…that’s so nice of yoh Diegow! Yoh! yeah, i feel like rappin with your name eh, well…what u say is agreeable..talking about the outlet..but, in literature the writer is dead..no direct link to the persona or character speaking in it…i mean that i am necessarily not the one speaking there…it can be you, other people, or someone else…
Comment by Denver Torres — March 20, 2008 @ 9:52 am
I use to write poems. I forgot the whole content but the title is “Some people and others”. It’s about what people do when they get bored. I remember some lines “some people play billards and others basketball. But when they’re bored, they even play their balls. I wasn’t relating this to myself but this is applicable to me. I mean it could happen to me too. The poem you wrote could happen to you too.
Comment by DiegoYo! — March 20, 2008 @ 10:07 am
well,i agree..ur correct…that’s what i said earlier, u should continue writing poems, and i bet it is ur best outlet to let out that most hidden fantasies u have about balls people play when they are alone.lol, if u write humorous poems and be good at it, you can be the next Geoffrey Chaucer, the Canterbury Tales author…so, write on Diegowww! good luck!!!
..and oh, ur kinda flirting with me with ur messages or..is it something that u are so natural about…being flirty…heheheh
Comment by Denver Torres — March 20, 2008 @ 10:29 am
Assumption is the mother of all fuck ups. Well, that is not your fault since you don’t know me that much yet. But then, I don’t flirt. Peole seduce people more when they do not flirt. Do you agree? But even so I don’t seduce anyone. It’s just that almost everyone, even the most timid person would be interested about green topics.
Well, I like food too. I am interested in poetry but I do not have much time to do that these days. I’ve been away from my pen and my journals for quite some time already. I am interested in arts too. I do paintings and crafts but I need to learn other stuffs too so I could mixed them up with my interestand skills and maybe make something great someday.
Anyway, I never flirt. Not even with girls. I’ve had enough already. Whehehehe
Comment by DiegoYo! — March 20, 2008 @ 10:41 am
Literally, I hate to cook if cooking oil is involved since it hurts so much. hehehe. I know that the writer had a mixed emotions while cooking his dinner and that made him think of the other things that were happening in his surrounding. I found the poem very sensible and the writer really possess the brain of a poet.
Comment by evoy — March 20, 2008 @ 10:42 am
I see…so, yes u do not flirt, I get it..like u do not have to say many times gosh….anyway, that was just a question..heheheh, but u look like a flirt..u seem to do it well, anyway…so be the same..flirty looking, fun, nice, green guy…be the u that i know…okay…peace yoh!
Comment by Denver Torres — March 20, 2008 @ 10:45 am
I just don’t know what to say dawg! Maybe they call that flirting but that’s not the way I flirt before. I think that never works for me. Anyway, I’m cool….. so we’re cool. Your doing a great job here. Keep doing the lord’s work. Peace!
Comment by DiegoYo! — March 20, 2008 @ 10:48 am
wow! that’s so nice of you to say that, Evoy..not so many people can read the way you do…and thank God I’ve met you…and read my poem…brain of a poet? wow that’s poetic too…maybe ur a poet as well..
, i see that with that being said, ur saying that a poet has a different brain different from the the usual brain floating around…tnx again..hope to hear from you soon..keep reading, ayt!…
Comment by Denver Torres — March 20, 2008 @ 10:49 am
Oist!!!! what’s that, huh??? ahahahha… elow DiegYo! Nice poem Denver… i appreciate it soooo much…
It is very commom to all of us, that somehow we get pissed off and tired of all the “Sang katutak na malas” in our lives… We want to get rid of it, and start a new day. “Refresh” ika nga… One thing I can relate to this poem is the advertisement thing “Have a break, have a kitkat”… Foodtrip after all the malas and hardwork…
Ayt? mmmuah!
Comment by niers — March 20, 2008 @ 10:57 am
Thank you for saying that Niers..such a refreshing fact to see and realize that you guys can relate to my poem and make valid connections..i appreciate that really…and oh about DiegYo and I? we are just making a little LQ? that is Little Quarrel! ryt?
lov yah!
Comment by Denver Torres — March 20, 2008 @ 11:06 am
Yeah that’s cool! go Diegyo! I mean that’s cool..and that makes you a cool boy…lol
Comment by Denver Torres — March 20, 2008 @ 11:23 am
Cool boy my a_ _! Hehehehe Php 1500 lang. Going once? Going twice?
Comment by DiegoYo! — March 20, 2008 @ 11:28 am
Diegyo! sorry but i get free f**k…i don’t care if the bid expires..hehehe peace…:) hehehe…i like ur riding with the tide there huh..that’s really cool…really such a cool thing Diegyo..hope to see many comments in the future man..alryt… have a great day…they say..igatz awws I mean ingatz! hehehehe
Comment by Denver Torres — March 20, 2008 @ 11:37 am
At first, I was wondering how the writer hates the oil. But then this is the writer’s way of draining stress out of her system. It was a great poem
Comment by grachel — March 21, 2008 @ 6:11 am
Thank you for the comments Grachel. Yes, it think it’s kind of new and refreshing to read something not commonly chosen as subjects…tnx for seeing that…have a great day and may the GRACE be with u…
Comment by Denver Torres — March 21, 2008 @ 6:15 am