My LiteratureMay 12, 2008 7:31 pm
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Hey!
Y’know, I’ve been reading lots of your works lately (that is, from the moment you told me that they were published online up until now) and I really think that I ought to submit a comment to let y’know I’ve been reading them lots. And yeah, I was really thankful that you came up to me and paid me a visit b’cause I am really a shy person and, frankly speaking, I wouldn’t really expect you to remember, or at least care about remembering me, so I just let things pass. Yep, I’ve been passing through your station day by day whenever I go to the distant CR (which is, I believe, not a CR b’cause it doesn’t provide no comfort for leaking urethras) and yep, I really wished I could come up in your station sometimes and have a chatt. You were very BRAVE when you came up to me. I really appreciate that. I couldn’t have done that for a million pesos (or maybe I will, but it kinda looses the whole concept of hesitation).
And here goes, I would like to comment on them poem b’cause they are the ones which reminded me of the Denver I knew way back in the Malasag Eco-whatever. But, in this case, I cannot come up with a proper comment yet. I was too excited to come up with a thank-you message and a “hi.” Hope to see you a lot.
Thankee-sai!
www.hamonoakira.multiply.com
Comment by Arnold — May 24, 2008 @ 7:07 pm
Hey!
Y’know, I’ve been reading lots of your works lately (that is, from the moment you told me that they were published online up until now) and I really think that I ought to submit a comment to let y’know I’ve been reading them lots. And yeah, I was really thankful that you came up to me and paid me a visit b’cause I am really a shy person and, frankly speaking, I wouldn’t really expect you to remember, or at least care about remembering me, so I just let things pass. Yep, I’ve been passing through your station day by day whenever I go to the distant CR (which is, I believe, not a CR b’cause it doesn’t provide no comfort for leaking urethras) and yep, I really wished I could come up in your station sometimes and have a chatt. You were very BRAVE when you came up to me. I really appreciate that. I couldn’t have done that for a million pesos (or maybe I will, but it kinda looses the whole concept of hesitation).
And here goes, I would like to comment on them poem b’cause they are the ones which reminded me of the Denver I knew way back in the Malasag Eco-whatever. But, in this case, I cannot come up with a proper comment yet. I was too excited to come up with a thank-you message and a “hi.” Hope to see you a lot.
Thankee-sai!
www.hamonoakira.multiply.com
Comment by Arnold — May 24, 2008 @ 7:08 pm
Hey!
Y’know, I’ve been reading lots of your works lately (that is, from the moment you told me that they were published online up until now) and I really think that I ought to submit a comment to let y’know I’ve been reading them lots. And yeah, I was really thankful that you came up to me and paid me a visit b’cause I am really a shy person and, frankly speaking, I wouldn’t really expect you to remember, or at least care about remembering me, so I just let things pass. Yep, I’ve been passing through your station day by day whenever I go to the distant CR (which is, I believe, not a CR b’cause it doesn’t provide no comfort for leaking urethras) and yep, I really wished I could come up in your station sometimes and have a chatt. You were very BRAVE when you came up to me. I really appreciate that. I couldn’t have done that for a million pesos (or maybe I will, but it kinda looses the whole concept of hesitation).
And here goes, I would like to comment on them poem b’cause they are the ones which reminded me of the Denver I knew way back in the Malasag Eco-whatever. But, in this case, I cannot come up with a proper comment yet. I was too excited to come up with a thank-you message and a “hi.” Hope to see you a lot.
Thankee-sai!
www.hamonoakira.multiply.com
Comment by Arnold — May 24, 2008 @ 7:09 pm
Thank you for reading my works. It is a pleasure to the intellect to know that someone-somewhere is reading my thoughts and try to relate to it. I can only thank you so much.
Well, I may have a poor memory on names but not faces and the way they have impacted my life. My memory of you is fun and exxiting. Remember that the Malasag intellectual adventure was my first time (in terms of writibng workshop) so, those days, I lost my literary virginity…lol..
So, how can I forget y’all guys…right? Arnold..you were sleeping opposite my bed pa nga eh..so..I should remember..eheheh
I will be a friend to friendly ones..shy ones..all people..just do not bite me to bleed…because I will never be near you again…ever…hhahahaha..kidding
I would love to see your comments on my works…I will be excited waiting for them…be honest on what you say..I will appreciate all honesty…
See yah around, and remember I am your friend even if you see me not smiling a lot…that’s normal in my case…I am not this smiley-sweet person…I show affection and friendship in other ways…not smiling a lot…
so be assured that even if I frown or look grumpy…I am a friend..Ok?
have a great day there, Arnold…
Comment by Denver Torres — May 24, 2008 @ 7:58 pm
Thank you for reading my works. It is a pleasure to the intellect to know that someone-somewhere is reading my thoughts and try to relate to it. I can only thank you so much.
Well, I may have a poor memory on names but not faces and the way they have impacted my life. My memory of you is fun and exxiting. Remember that the Malasag intellectual adventure was my first time (in terms of writibng workshop) so, those days, I lost my literary virginity…lol..
So, how can I forget y’all guys…right? Arnold..you were sleeping opposite my bed pa nga eh..so..I should remember..eheheh
I will be a friend to friendly ones..shy ones..all people..just do not bite me to bleed…because I will never be near you again…ever…hhahahaha..kidding
I would love to see your comments on my works…I will be excited waiting for them…be honest on what you say..I will appreciate all honesty…
See yah around, and remember I am your friend even if you see me not smiling a lot…that’s normal in my case…I am not this smiley-sweet person…I show affection and friendship in other ways…not smiling a lot…
so be assured that even if I frown or look grumpy…I am a friend..Ok?
have a great day there, Arnold…
Comment by Denver Torres — May 24, 2008 @ 8:00 pm
Hehe, first, pardon me of my impatience and ignorance that I sent my comment quite a few times.:)
But I thank you for opening up and so for the friendship:P
See ya ‘round.
HA08/
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♥♥♥
Comment by Arnold — May 24, 2008 @ 8:40 pm